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The Broom Town Curse

About 1850 there was a small settlement just several miles from here. The roads into the settlement are all overgrown with trees and underbrush, and no mention of the settlement shows on any map. There is an old guy in town that could guide us there, but he tells me beside himself there are few who even remember where the settlement was or anything about it.

Hundreds of years ago, when people chose a place for a settlement they often chose it for defensive reasons. This settlement had plenty of reason to worry about defense too. You see, all the folks who lived there had been suspected of witchcraft, and had fled their homes and villages to keep from being persecuted. That is the reason the settlement is so far off the beaten path. The settlement's name was 'Haven', but everyone referred to it as Broom Town. For hundreds of miles around people knew of Broom Town, but not exactly where it was. In fact an old saying used to be "He better head to Broom Town", or "If she's not careful she'll end up in Broom Town." . In fact some parents used to tell their kids that if they were not good they would end up in Broom Town.

Yep, Broom Town had quite a mystique to it.

In Fact many who knew of Broom Town thought that it was seeped in magic, but of course we will never really know. What we do know however is that not everyone who went looking for Broom Town found it. Those who did find it never talked about it. There is no written record of life there, but there is a written record of death.

Well it seems that during the Civil War a troop of soldiers attacked and destroyed Broom Town and killed everyone there. Now here's the weird thing, there is no record of which side took this action. No one knows if it was the North or the South. There was a battle diary found on the turnpike, and it had a Captain's name in it, but Captain John Bell was the name shared by two men. One was a captain for the South and one was a captain for the North. Both were in the area during that period of time. Both died around the same time, and no one could tell who the battle diary belonged to. No one from their units could be found to clear things up either. So all that we are left with is an entry in a battle diary.

This is what it said:

While on reconnaissance ,Saturday (rest of date blurred), discovered small fortified position in small valley. Unable to tell if friend of foe. From tall tree my spotter can see people moving behind walls. The response to my questions shouted at the people behind the walls is one of rebuke. We are told to go away.

In need of food and supplies. Have determined Activities suspicious and possible hostile, will attack at dawn tomorrow. Will use last of dynamite to blow main gates.

Sunday Noon, Action successful. Battle was short, all fought against us but our training proved out in the end. 2 dead 3 wounded from unit, wounded able to move. Must move out soon. Men restless, superstitions running wild in unit. Many defenders yelled curses as they fought, and spoke in unknown language.

Sunday Night, Camp set up 8 miles south of previous position.

Monday morning. Our position harassed by assassins , 2 dead, wailing and screams occur just before attack. Humorous note cook claims must be banshees.

Tuesday morning, Harassed again over night, 4 dead. Am starting to believe in banshees. That is the last entry in the book.

Now that in itself is interesting, but what happens next is even more interesting. You see, Alfred Bell and his brother Thomas, came visiting into the area about 1910. They stayed in a hotel that was pretty fancy for those times. It was called the Manor House. What happened was that other guests of the hotel were awakened in the middle of the night. They reported that around 2:00 am, in the wee hours of the morning they all heard wailing and screams coming from somewhere in the hotel. It lasted for about 20 minutes, And during that time winds howled out side and the lights went out, and some people even reported that the doors to their rooms shook real hard like someone trying to get in. By the time someone checked the Brother's rooms, hours had passed, but both men were unquestionably dead. No wounds could be found, the only blood came from where one brother had bitten his own tongue off, and it lay on the floor beside him. Their faces were froze in horror, eyes opened wide in shock, the pupils rolled back out of sight so that only the white of the eye could be seen. Their hands were raised in front of them as though they were trying to ward off something.

Well back then there were still plenty of people who remembered the Broom Town incident, but they did not piece it together until Alfred and Thomas's cousin came to get the bodies. You see the same thing happened to him, here's what happened.  

It was about 11:00 at night.  Many in the hotel had already gone to bed for the night, The cousin was one of them.  In the room with him was a salesman, they had met on the stage ride to town, and decided to share a room and split the cost.  They flipped a coin for the bed, and the cousin lost, his name was Gregory.  He was sleeping on several quilts that he had placed near the fireplace.  Well, at 11:00 pm that night, the salesman reported that Gregory was crying out in his sleep.  This woke him, and from the bed he watched as Gregory tossed and turned.  He could see him fairly clearly in the glow from the coals of the fire.  Suddenly Gregory yelled and sat straight up.  The salesman was about to say something when an awful screech sounded in the room.  Outside, the winds rose to storm pitch, and the shutters rocked in their fasteners banging against the windows.  The salesman said he covered his head, and peeked out from under the covers.  He saw this huge black shadow in the center of the room. Gregory had crawled to a corner, and was half standing half crouched, his back supported by two walls where they came together.  He was yelling “NO!! NO!!  and  seemed to be trying to bat something unseen away with his hands.  The shadow moved towards Gregory, and as it did the salesman could see the other side of the shadow reflected in the mirror.  It looked as though hundreds of heads hung attached to the black shape.  There were adult heads both young and old, there were the heads of children, boys and girls.  And as the salesman watched one of the heads would open its mouth and wail, then the others would join in.  Then the eyes would open, yet there were no eyes, just a hot red much like the coals of the fire in the fireplace. With all the eyes open, a reddish glow brightened the room, and in the mirror the salesman saw that some of the heads still had what looked like blood on them.  One head in particular had been split almost in half, and the brain mushroomed out globbish and ugly.   Several heads had only one eye, and one even had its nose cut off.  The salesman was afraid he was going to be sick, but he was afraid more and he watched terrified, The  heads wailed and screeched again then moved over to the corner, and he heard Gregory yell in terror but could not see him as the shadow covered him completely then all was quiet. The salesman hid under the blanket, and it was many minutes before he peeked out again. When he did the shadow had gone, the wind had stopped, and Gregory was dead in the corner of the room.  The salesman jumped from the bed, and rushing to the door, flung it open, screaming.

The story of the salesman traveled fast, and soon few people would come to the small town or stay at the hotel.  

Then one day an old woman showed up at the hotel.  When people on the street asked her if she planned to stay at the hotel she replied “Sure,  I ain’t related to them that be cursed.”  When asked what she meant, she told them all the story of Broom Town. That is when they remembered the rumor of curses and so forth.  Yet, the old woman told them more, you see the soldiers became very afraid when they found out the people they fought might have been witches.  To solve the fears his men had, John Bell told his men that if they cut off the heads of the witches and buried them separate, then the dead souls of the witches could never find them, so that is what they did.

Unfortunately for John Bell and his relatives he was wrong.  Now, if anyone who took part in that raid comes within 25 miles of Broom Town, the witches come to take their revenge. However, because the heads are not attached to the bodies the angry headless spirits move around trying to find their cut off heads, and that is what causes the sound of a howling wind.

Through the years, many people have been visited by the specter of the screaming wailing heads of the witches.  

In fact some of the old timers think that is why both Captain John Bell's disappeared at the same time. Related some how, the screaming banshees took their revenge on the unsuspecting relative of the guilty John Bell.   I hope there are no relatives of the attackers camping here tonight, but if the winds begin to blow real hard…beware.

   

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